Reviews and Recent Comments:

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  Samuel Young: Good.
  User rated this game 5/5 on 2015-01-15



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  Christopher Turkowski: Mini game was unreadable up until now. Read a few pages, and a lot of work was done to fix this journey. So glad to finally have it fixed
  User rated this game 4/5 on 2015-08-22



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  Sarah Forde: The English was written strangely but it added to the flavor and language of the words as if it really was from other globe. I enjoyed it and they length was very satisfying.
  User rated this game 4/5 on 2014-11-13



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  Houston Floyd: its alright but seriously i know it seems like a pain but receive someone to translate or atleast fix it cause its awful man true awful not the story but the articulation
  User rated this game 4/5 on 2019-02-08



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  Mad Melee: It is much better after the modernize
  User rated this game 4/5 on 2015-08-15



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  Josh Shanks: Since the recent modernize, this mini game has become much better. Its still not excellent, but you can understand it at least.
  User rated this game 4/5 on 2015-08-32



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  Patrick Parent: I played this on pc first and it is a awesome mini game it just needs to be proofread badly. I do hope the writer finishes the story as it is awesome the English is just a large putoff
  User rated this game 3/5 on 2014-10-31



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  A Google user: I had a hard time reading it. The plot is cool and the heroes are ok.
  User rated this game 3/5 on 2018-09-03



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  Tech Priest of Tasty Beats: But the fact that the English is so awful it kinda ruins it...I hope you fix it because it should be a really awesome mini game
  User rated this game 3/5 on 2014-09-13



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  Jerry Curl: I'm finding it hard to receive in to it simply because the words are either mixed up or used wrong and I only just started.
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2014-11-16



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  Jared Schindler: Their is still alot of grammatical errors. Im going to hold the mini game though and hope they modernize it with all the errors fixed!
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2014-09-07



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  Matthew Hinman: The grammar is not very awesome at all extremely confusing!
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2015-04-02



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  Mohamad Idham: I hope this Uzbekistan teen knows English,which sadly he don't.But never mind,but please modernize this apk and correct all the typos.Almost nothing is understandable,for the word arrangement is method too messy.And some brought the same meaning too.But the plot is great.At least that was if its not tainted with misspells.
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2014-09-08



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  Jordan Ryberg: More Story less mini game of choices
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2014-09-08



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  Ryan OB: I couldn't receive into the mini game, with all the grammar errors. It makes the choices 5x more difficult.
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2018-08-18



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  Mocha: Once more, I couldn't receive into it like with the demo, the English is still very choppy and someone could have helped edit it more before releasing it. I'm sure it's a good mini game, I just can't really receive into it. I won't refund, for help of the author, but I'd like to see changes created when the mini game is updated.
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2014-09-06



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  Saskia Black: Look I think the writer has a awesome story here. Just needs a native English speaker or anyone to fix all the grammar issues. There were a few on the first page. I'm not even a grammar Nazi, its just hard to focus on the story because of the errors. Receive that fixed and I'll give u a good review.
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2015-03-08



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  A Google user: This mini game needs a awesome proofreading. This has a lot of potential but I could't receive into the story because of the grammatical errors. Trying to read this became quite painful after a while. I'm going to hold the mini game in hopes of a awesome modernize in the future.
  User rated this game 2/5 on 2014-11-12



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  A Dale: Awful language structure is far worse of a sin than awful spelling.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2016-07-15



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  Naliflower: The English is very awful and it makes it hard to receive into the story
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2015-07-20



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  Cfs Kuffuorge: Terrible. Not worth spending cash on or reading.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2016-01-05



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  A Google user: Awful grammer.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2018-09-15



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  Alex Lord: The grammer is just not awesome, makes it impossible to test and receive into the mini game, really want I should receive a refund
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2014-09-07



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  Jonathon Meyer: If I'm going to pay for something wish to be able to read it without having trying to decipher it. And I also I at suck grammar so if I message it. It must be awful.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2015-10-20



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  Revan Fadewalker: Worst ebook I've read in the whole of both choice of mini games llc hosted mini games llc ..
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2017-10-24



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  Kris Reynolds: The grammar is so horrible as to create the story unreadable. Waste of cash until it is spellchecked and edited by a native English speaker.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2015-06-03



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  Stephanie Keeler: Awful, awful writing
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2017-04-28



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  Adam Mitchell: Awful grammer. Hard to read.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2016-07-23



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  Dylan Noel: I tried to read it but it felt like this guy didn't know english and used a very awful translater ( Google probably) I can normally handle grammar error but not when they are in every sentence and can't understand what I am reading modernize the grammar and I might buy it once more
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2018-03-24



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  StarcraftJunkie: English. The author clearly speaks English as a second language, and has neglected to have a native speaker or at least someone more proficient in the language proofread and edit his work. The entire work is filled with choppy, poorly phrased sentences; some so much so that you can't even tell what they are trying to say. It is headache to read and entirely destroys any immersion in the story. Until this is fixed, I would not suggest buying this mini game.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2014-09-06



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  Anthony Salinas: Wasn't edited as well as it should've been. Became a headache trying to force myself into the story
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2014-09-06



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  George Franks: Who ever created this probably just ran the text through google translate and called it a day
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2014-11-21



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  RavinerPayne: The grammer is horrid. I bought it and should only barely force myself through what I think is chapter 1. I didn't even start the journey.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2017-05-26



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  Jason Mackintosh: Almost unintelligable. This could not be for sale at all. There has been no effort place into the translation whatsoever and I would like my cash back.
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2014-09-11



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  Stowe Angel: don't spend the cash on this ebook it's awful the grammar is so awful a friendly sugesstion just don't receive it
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2017-09-14



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  Staci Hollis: Horrible grammer and spelling I can't even create it through half a page once it improves I will read it
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2017-12-17



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  Charlie Ellis: Awful grammar, awful spelling, in the first 20 pages or so I think there were 3 meaningful actions?? The description is awesome and imaginative if overly long and in depth. Much better interactive novels accessible. Test the lost heir if not already
  User rated this game 1/5 on 2016-07-23